Writing Style Guide
Your guide to digital and print content at UCLA Health
Last updated: May 2026
The UCLA Health Writing Style Guide is a grammar and style reference for anyone writing or publishing digital or print copy for the organization. The writing style guide is intended to guarantee consistency across internal and external communications. All UCLA Health content needs to go through an official review.
Introduction
The UCLA Health Writing Style Guide is a reference guide for anyone who wishes to write or publish digital or print copy for the organization.
Much of what you will find in this style guide is from the AP Stylebook, as it has been the policy of the organization to use its style guide. We have changed some of the guidelines to be more relevant to our organization’s needs. This guide is a supplement to the AP Stylebook and does not replace it.
If you have questions about spelling, punctuation or other fine points of grammar, refer to this guide. Use it like a dictionary as well as a guideline for how to write for UCLA Health’s publications — digital or print. Items are listed alphabetically.
UCLA Health Mission, Vision and Values
Our goal is to provide the best patient experience with every patient, every encounter, every time.
Our mission is to deliver leading-edge patient care, research and education.
Our vision is to heal humankind, one patient at a time, by improving health, alleviating suffering and delivering acts of kindness.
UCLA Health employees are committed to the UCLA CICARE approach with every patient, family or employee interaction. The CICARE approach adheres to the following:
- Connect with the patient, family and colleagues by addressing them by their preferred names and pronouns.
- Introduce yourself and your role.
- Communicate what you are about to do, how long it will take and how it will affect the patient, family or colleague.
- Ask and anticipate questions from the patient, family and colleagues.
- Respond with immediacy to questions and requests from the patient, family and colleagues.
- Exit every encounter with e-8-mpathy and share what will come next.
Legally Usable Content
- Everything you write should be your own writing. If you quote another source, insert the source as well as the source URL so Marketing and Communications can evaluate the original content and, if appropriate, provide readers with a direct link to it.
- Only use medically reviewed information from reliable sources, such as .edu, .org and .gov sites.
- Never post pictures that you find using Google images or a similar search engine, or use photos pulled from Facebook, X or other social media channels without permission. We may not have the usage rights and posting such pictures could pose legal problems.
Voice and Tone
When we communicate with our audiences, we want to use a voice and tone that establishes our brand but varies based on context.
Voice
Voice = what our brand means to consumers
- We want to provide people with health-related information and empower them to make informed decisions about their health.
- We are a team of passionate, dedicated, collaborative experts who support and serve patients and their diverse needs.
- Our voice is our connection to the audience.
- Strike a balance of expertise and approachability.
- Communicate in a way that inspires the curiosity to know more.
- While we want to make the world aware of all the amazing breakthroughs we continue to achieve, we have to spread those messages in a way that’s accessible and relevant to our audience’s everyday lives and challenges.
Tone
Tone= how we change the sound of “our voice” based on the context of the communication
- Genuine, heartfelt, and inspiring
- Conversational but not casual, informative but not academic
- Our tone embraces familiarity over formality when conveying our innovative spirit
- Whether we’re speaking to external audiences such as patients, local communities, donors, the academic community — or internally to faculty and staff, our tone needs to remain consistent. Since those audiences are very different, there will be room for interpretation.
- Staying true to the “Keep on rising” ethos will still allow for striking the right balance tonally with each of our specific audiences.
Examples:
- On a web page about cancer, we will have the same voice about our brand, but we may be softer and more reassuring.
- On a web page about having a baby, we will be more excited and congratulatory.
Writing Tips
While most of us possess some technical writing skills, we can all use a refresher course in good writing before preparing text for a publication. Here are some tips that will help you write clear, concise copy to communicate your message to your audience.
Consider your audience
Keep in mind your audience’s reading level and knowledge of the subject. Two brochures on the same surgical procedure — one for patients and the other for physicians — require different writing styles. Put yourself in your audience’s shoes — write in a way that draws the reader’s attention to the substance of the writing.
Write at the appropriate reading level for the appropriate audiences; please try not to write higher than a sixth-grade reading level. Flesch-Kinkaid is a free tool to test the readability of your work.
Determine your purpose
Decide what you want your readers to do, think or feel after reading the publication. You may want them to register for a conference, understand more about a service or procedure or feel comfortable coming to UCLA Health. Keep your purpose in mind throughout the entire piece.
Begin with an outline
Think about the main points in your message and how you want the information to flow. Draft an outline of your main ideas to help you get started. You may want to share the outline with a colleague for feedback before you begin writing.
Write, rewrite and write again
Revising is part of writing. After you’ve compiled your first draft, review it with a critical eye and edit it using the guidelines in this manual. Ask co-workers to critique the copy; be willing to incorporate suggestions. Consider reading it aloud to yourself to see if it makes sense. When you’re done writing, read through it again as an objective editor. Ask yourself: If you were the reader would this appeal to you? Is it clear and easy to understand? Is there any information missing?
Proofread/spell-check
Proofread carefully in addition to using your computer’s spell-check.
Check your facts
Fact checking your work is essential for good writing. Make sure that you are using reliable sources to confirm what you are writing is factual and accurate. Provide links to sources if appropriate.
Active voice and positive form
Write in active voice, not passive.
Examples:
- “The department sponsored a lecture,” rather than “The lecture was sponsored by the department.”
- “We treat condition X,” not “The condition is treated.”
You can check use of passive voice using the grammar check in Word:
- Go to Tools > Spelling and Grammar > Options > Settings.
- Check for passive sentences.
There are occasional instances where passive voice is unavoidable. Example: You can say “When you are discharged,” not “When we discharge you.” However, when in doubt, err on the side of active voice.
Keep it specific and concise
Most people have a great deal of reading to do each day. Keep your text as concise as possible to make your piece more readable. Use details rather than generalities to explain a main point. Include concrete examples when possible. Eliminate repetition, remove unnecessary words and condense long phrases.
Follow these best practices for breaking text into properly sized paragraphs:
- Try to limit chunks, or paragraphs, to 2 sentences. Limit sentences to 14-20 words. Break up compound sentences.
- Include up to 2 paragraphs (or chunks) under a heading for page symmetry. Three may be acceptable, especially if the preceding paragraphs are short.
- When the topic changes, create a new paragraph.
Avoid jargon, clichés and wordy prepositional phrases.
| Avoid | Use Instead |
|---|---|
| as a matter of fact | in fact |
| at this point in time | now, today |
| in close proximity | near |
| true facts | facts |
| past history | history |
| mutual cooperation | cooperation |
| is in the process of | is |
| utilized | used |
Avoid using formal or scholarly tone unless necessary
A conversational tone is more readable and usually more effective. Technical documents may require a more formal tone. Again, consider your audience. Avoid Latinisms such as e.g., i.e., etc.
Choose verbs carefully
Strong, descriptive verbs add color to copy and eliminate the need for wordy phrases.
| Avoid | Use Instead |
|---|---|
| have a need for | need |
| take into consideration | consider |
| announcement was made | announce |
| have a tendency | tend |
| take action | act |
| made a statement | stated |
| is in the process of | is |
| utilized | used |
Avoid verbs ending in –ing
| Avoid | Use Instead |
|---|---|
| is planning to hold | plans to hold |
| will be leading the committee | will lead the committee |
Do not use nouns as verbs
| Avoid | Use Instead |
|---|---|
| This policy will affect patients. | This policy affects patients. |
| The hospital and the company are partners. | The hospital partnered with the company. |
Use bullets effectively
Bulleted text helps highlight information and makes the text more readable. Overuse of bullets, however, can make brochures and similar pieces look awkward. Bullets and lists are especially useful for digital content.
- When the order isn’t important, list the items alphabetically.
- Always capitalize the first letter of each bulleted item.
- If the list includes any fragments, do not end items with periods.
- Example: The job duties include:
- Monitoring patients
- Taking vital signs
- If the list comprises complete sentences, use periods at the end of each item.
- Example: The job duties include:
- Use no more than 7 bullets, including sub-bullets. If you find that your list is longer than 7, see if you can break up the information into a separate h3 paragraph. Exception: A list of symptoms may be longer than 7 items.
- Bullets should have parallel structure, such as all full sentences or all phrases. And each bullet should start with the same part of speech: a noun, verb, noun phrase or verb phrase.
- Do not start each bulleted phrase with the same words. Example: When explaining a procedure, do not use “we will” again and again.
- Do not include articles, such as “A” or “An.” Write “Experienced team,” not “An experienced team.”
Examples:
No: When you come for your evaluation, you will meet with your team, including cardiologists, cardiac surgeons, interventional cardiologists and cardiac anesthesiologists.
Yes: When you come for your evaluation, you will meet with members of your team, including:
- Cardiologists
- Cardiac surgeons
- Interventional cardiologists
- Cardiac anesthesiologists
Calls to Action (CTA)
Every page should include at least one call to action (CTA). This section invites the reader to “do something,” such as find a doctor, make an appointment or register for a class. A CTA should include the information necessary for the reader to take the action:
- Phone numbers should be formatted as 888-888-8888. Do not include parentheses. Add a hyperlink for mobile usage.
- Link (online appointment, physician finder, class registration)
- Form to download
Let the reader know what to expect from the link they are about to click. For example, it’s better to use “Read more mental health stories” instead of “Read more”.
If you have a landing page with multiple links to subpages, do not use “learn more about…” every time. Vary the CTA with:
- Explore more
- Find out more
- Read more
- Discover more
CTA buttons
Follow these guidelines:
- Text in a CTA button should be actionable.
- Users should be able to cover the rest of the text on the page and still understand the CTA button.
- Do not use any punctuation in CTA buttons.
- Use title case in for all CTA button copy.
- Only two buttons should be listed in the same section.
Capitalization
Title case
Capitalize the first word of the title/heading and any subtitle/subheading and all “major” words (nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs and pronouns).
When to use title case:
- Webpage and print h1s and h2s: You should capitalize:
- Principle words, including prepositions and conjunctions of 4 or more letters
- The, a, an – or words of fewer than 4 letters if they are the first or last word in a title
- Both parts of hyphenated words
- Search tags, category and filter options such as provider search result filters
- In the universal navigation on uclahealth.org (top, navy blue navigation/section of website). Also, use ampersand when connecting two topics (Community & Equity)
- In the global navigation of uclahealth.org (white navigation): Title Case; Lower-case for connector words (with, and, in); use ampersand
- In the Footer navigation
- Call-to-actions: Follow CTA guidelines and use title case for CTA buttons.
Example: [h1] Find a Doctor Near You
Sentence case
Capitalize the first word of the title/heading and of any subtitle/subheading; and capitalize any proper nouns. Use lowercase for everything else.
When to use sentence case:
- Webpage and print h3s and h4s: Use sentence case for all headers except the h1s.
- Articles, blog posts, news releases, email content: In all headers (h1s, h2s, h3s, and so on), capitalize the first word of the title/heading and of any subtitle/subheading and capitalize any proper nouns. Use lowercase for everything else.
- In-text call-to-action links: Use sentence case and don’t include punctuation.
- Call-to-actions: Follow CTA guidelines and use sentence case except buttons.
Example:
[h1] UCLA Health’s early use of electronic records system aids in curbing the spread of deadly fungus
Exceptions
- News, blogs, email content use sentence case for all headers.
- UCLA Health Magazine uses title case.
- Capitalize the entire specialty name on the hyperlinks within the Medical Services page.
Additional guidelines
Capitalize:
- Complete official names of departments, clinics or programs. Example: At the Pituitary Disorders Center, we provide centralized care for you.
- Compositions, including names of publications, music, works of art, television programs. Capitalization of compositions should match that of the original publication. When writing an original publication, use sentence case capitalization for the title.
- Derivatives of proper nouns such as American, Marxism.
- Formal titles when they immediately precede a physician’s name. Example: Medical Director, Jane F. Doe, MD or Chief of Cardiothoracic Surgery, John R. Smith, MD
- Proper names (such as the Democratic Party, Fleet Street)
- Proper names of all UCLA properties
- Proper nouns (official names of places, people or companies)
- Some common names. A common name is used when there is no official name for an area or place, but it has a well-known moniker. Examples: The Green Zone; Ground Zero.
- Specialties when they are part of the official name of the department, clinic or program. Example: The Division of Maternal Fetal Medicine provides expert care for high-risk pregnancies
- The first word after a bullet
- The first word of a sentence
- Titles, including but not limited to, Dr., Mrs., Mr. and Ms. With the exception of Dr., use titles only on the first reference to a person. On second and subsequent references, use only the last name.
Use lowercase:
- Specializations that are not part of a department name. Example: Dr. Smith, who specializes in endocrinology, leads our team.
- Titles that do not immediately precede the physician’s name. Example: Dr. Doe, the director of our cardiothoracic surgery program, has decades of experience performing minimally invasive heart surgery.
- Unofficial program titles. Example: Dr. Doe, the director of our cardiothoracic surgery program, has decades of experience performing minimally invasive heart surgery.
Always use numerals in headlines and titles, even for numbers one through nine. Example: Against all odds, 3 siblings were born with the same genetic disorder.
Punctuation
Apostrophes
Use to indicate possession (the doctor’s, the nurse’s), or omitted letters or figures (don’t, ’50s). Do not use to indicate plurals in numerals or acronyms: 1990s, HMOs, RNs.
Commas
In a series
Use commas to separate elements in a series, but do not place a comma before the conjunction in a simple series of three or more: We invited all patients, visitors and staff.
Put a comma before the concluding conjunction in a series, however, if an integral element of the series requires a conjunction: I had orange juice, toast, and ham and eggs for breakfast.
Use a comma before the concluding conjunction in a complex series of phrases: The main points to consider are whether the athletes are skillful enough to compete, whether they have the stamina to endure the training, and whether they have the proper mental attitude.
Parenthetic expressions
Sentences with brief descriptive phrases must use the apposition comma. The Employee Survey, coordinated by a multidisciplinary task force, will be fielded in September 2020.
With dates
Use a comma between the day and year and after the year: July 18, 2018, is the last day to submit research proposals. Do not use a comma between the month and year: July 2020.
With quotes
Commas and periods always go within quotations: “Don’t leave the gurney in the hall,” the orderly said.
With states
Use commas before and after state names when used with city names: Phoenix, Ariz., and Tucson, Ariz.
Ellipses (. . .)
(sing. ellipsis)
In general, treat an ellipsis as a three-letter word, constructed with three periods and two spaces. Use an ellipsis to indicate the deletion of one or more words in condensing quotes, texts and documents. Be careful to avoid deletions that distort the original meaning. (As a general rule, try to avoid using ellipses in a quote – it is better to find a quote that works in its entirety.)
Em dash (—) and en dash (–)
An em dash is roughly the length of a lowercase letter m and is generally used to replace colons, commas, hyphens, semi-colons and parentheses. Our style includes a space on either side of em dashes.
Use em dashes:
- Abrupt change: To denote an abrupt change in thought or an emphatic pause.
- Series within a phrase: When a phrase that otherwise would be set off by commas contains a series of words that must be separated by commas.
Example: Ronald Reagan UCLA Medical Center — an academic medical center in Los Angeles — is respected around the world for research and patient education.
An en dash is roughly the length of a lowercase letter n and is typically used to denote a span of time or in the place of a colon to create compounds (see example below). Follow these guidelines:
Use en dashes:
- To create compounds: like the California–Mexico border.
- To denote a span of time, if space is limited. Example: Monday – Thursday or 9 – 11 am. In all other cases, use to: Monday to Thursday. Refer to the Time entry for further clarification.
To insert an em or en dash in Word, choose Symbol from the Insert menu, click the Special Characters tab, highlight the dash and click Insert.
Hyphen (-)
Hyphens are joiners. Use them to avoid ambiguity or to form a single idea from two or more words.
As compound modifier
When a compound modifier — two or more words expressing a single concept — precedes a noun, use hyphens to link all the words in the compound except the adverb very and all adverbs that end in
–ly: a first-quarter touchdown, a bluish-green dress, a full-time job, a 2-year-old girl, an easily remembered rule.
However, omit the hyphen when the phrasal adjectives are commonly used and understood without the hyphen and the meaning is quite clear without one: a high school student, an affirmative action program, a primary care physician, the intensive care unit.
Use with a two-thought compound — socio-economic.
Periods
Only use one space after a period. Only use at end of bulleted items if the bulleted item is a complete sentence on its own. Do not use at the end of headlines.
Quotations
Periods and commas go within quotation marks; dashes, semicolons, question marks and exclamation points go within the quotation marks when they apply to the quoted matter only.
For quotes within quotes, alternate between double quotation marks (“or”) and single marks (‘or’):
Example: She said, “I quote from his letter, ‘I agree with Kipling that “the female of the species is more deadly than the male” but the phenomenon is not an unchangeable law of nature,’ a remark he did not explain.”
Use three marks together if two quoted elements end at the same time:
Example: She said, “He told me, ‘I love you.’”
Semicolons
Use in a sentence to separate two complete and related thoughts, or to separate items in a series when at least one of the items includes a comma. Think of a semicolon as a half pause that connects two sentences that could grammatically stand on their own.
Examples:
Dr. Smith went to Florida; it was her first vacation there.
The surgical team was made up of Dr. Kennan, who has served as department chair for three years; Dr. Jones, who has been with the hospital two years; and Dr. Johnson, who just transferred from an Atlanta hospital last month.
Spacing
Avoid unnecessary spaces:
- Use only one space after a period.
- When creating a bulleted list, the list should be flush to the intro line.
Linking policies
Include internal hyperlinks within the copy if it helps the user find the information they need. Internal hyperlinks should never open in a new window if they are keeping the user on the uclahealth.org domain.
Digital content on our public-facing website or Mednet may link to external websites that meet the criteria below (ultimately determined by UCLA Health Digital Marketing team.)
Please have links to external websites open in a new browser window.
- Websites that are owned by nonprofit health organizations and end in .org, such as the American Cancer Society (cancer.org)
- Websites of official UCLA content partners (i.e., content that is linked throughout the site)
- Any website that ends with “ucla.edu”
- Websites of businesses or organizations that are official marketing/community partners with UCLA Health (Bruin KidsClub, UCLA Athletics)
UCLA Health will not link to external websites that fall within any of the following criteria:
- Websites that are owned or managed by a political party, candidate or special-interest group or are of a political nature
- Websites containing any materials that may reasonably be considered offensive (sexual content or images or slurs against race, religious or political beliefs, age, gender, sexual orientation, national origin or physical attributes)
- Websites endorsing or selling products or services not sanctioned by UCLA Health
- Websites soliciting donations or funding
Links may be made to UCLA's website by outside contacts. All hypertext links should point to UCLA's homepage, uclahealth.org, unless another URL is otherwise agreed upon. We do not have control over websites that link to us, and the information about UCLA on these websites can become outdated. If you run across such a website, please contact the Content Manager, who will attempt to contact the other website and ask for the information to be updated or removed.
When in doubt about the content on an external website, please err on the side of caution to protect UCLA. Please feel free to contact the Marketing Department at requests.uclahealth.org for clarification.
Important: All links on uclahealth.org that point to external websites should open in a new tab.
Linking in Print Material
- In print, exclude “http://www.”
- Example: uclahealth.org, not https://www.uclahealth.org/
- Check that URL functions without “www” before publishing. Also, make sure the link is active and sends the reader to the correct website.
- In print material, use a QR code for important links and also provide the URL written out in case the reader needs to type it into a browser.
- If a URL is long and must be written out, consider requesting a vanity URL.
- Avoid writing out bitly links as they are hard to type into a browser correctly.
Naming Conventions for UCLA Health
Facility and department names
- UCLA Health
- Don’t refer to the UCLA Health System, uppercase. You can refer to UCLA Health as a health system where appropriate.
- Broad Stem Cell Research Center
- Use Eli and Edythe Broad Center of Regenerative Medicine and Stem Cell Research at UCLA
- Second reference can be UCLA Broad Stem Cell Research Center
- David Geffen School of Medicine at UCLA
- Second reference can use “David Geffen School of Medicine,” “medical school,” “school of medicine” or “UCLA's medical school”
- Doheny Eye Institute
- Includes three “Doheny Eye Center UCLA offices”
- When referring to UCLA Stein Eye Institute and Doheny Eye Institute together:
- UCLA Stein Eye and Doheny Eye Institutes (preferred)
- UCLA Stein and Doheny Eye Institutes (acceptable when in context of U.S. News & World Report rankings)
- When referring to UCLA Stein Eye Institute and Doheny Eye Institute together:
- Doris Stein Eye Research Center
- Includes three “Doheny Eye Center UCLA offices”
- Jane and Terry Semel Institute for Neuroscience and Human Behavior at UCLA
- Second reference can be shortened to UCLA Semel Institute
- Ronald Reagan UCLA Medical Center
- Simms/Mann UCLA Center for Integrative Oncology
- Second reference can use Simms/Mann Center
- Stein Plaza buildings
- Jules Stein Building
- Doris Stein Building
- Edie & Lew Wasserman Building
- UCLA Faculty Practice Group
- UCLA Health/Motion Picture Television Fund (MPTF) medical clinics
- Do not use MPTF in clinic names
- UCLA Health Jonsson Comprehensive Cancer Center
- Second reference can use UCLA Health JCCC
- Do not use just JCCC
- UCLA Health Regional Burn Center
- Refers to the inpatient clinic
- UCLA Health Regional Burn Center Outpatient Clinic
- Refers to the outpatient clinic
- UCLA Mattel Children’s Hospital
- UCLA Medical Plaza buildings and locations
- Peter Morton Medical Building — 200 UCLA Medical Plaza
- Vatche and Tamar Manoukian Building — 100 UCLA Medical Plaza
- Wendy and Leonard Goldberg Medical Building — 300 UCLA Medical Plaza
- UCLA Resnick Mental Health Campus
- New name of new location of Resnick Neuropsychiatric Hospital
- The Stewart and Lynda Resnick Neuropsychiatric Hospital at UCLA
- Also referred to as Resnick Neuropsychiatric Hospital at UCLA
- Second reference can be RNPH
- This hospital is relocating and renaming to Resnick Mental Health Campus
- UCLA Santa Monica Medical Center
- UCLA Stein Eye Institute
- UCLA West Valley Medical Center
Affiliation references
- Barlow Respiratory Hospital
- Use Barlow Respiratory Hospital on first mention, Barlow Hospital for second mention and beyond
- California Rehabilitation Institute
- Second reference can be Cal Rehab
- Partnership between UCLA Health and Cedars-Sinai Medical Center and managed by Select Medical
- UCLA Health at home with AccentCare, home health services
- UCLA Health Medicare Advantage Plans
- UCLA Health Sports Performance, powered by EXOS
- UCLA Health Training Center, home of the Los Angeles Lakers
Clinics, centers and programs
- If needed, you can add the word clinic after a proper name, lowercased. Example: Welcome to the UCLA Health Porter Ranch Cancer Care clinic.
- Only capitalize clinic if it’s in the proper name of the place. Example: The Men’s Health Clinic.
- Only call something a center or program if it is officially designated as one.
Acronyms
UCLA Health has its own particular alphabet shorthand. Recognizing that it's not always practical to write out the full name of our facilities, we offer this guide to acceptable acronyms to use (on second reference). Generally, we use these in internal correspondence only though some exceptions are noted below for external material.
- DGSOM: David Geffen School of Medicine at UCLA
- FPG: UCLA Faculty Practice Group
- MCH: UCLA Mattel Children’s Hospital
- RNPH: Resnick Neuropsychiatric Hospital at UCLA
- OK for external use on second reference
- RRUCLA: Ronald Reagan UCLA Medical Center
- SMUCLA: UCLA Santa Monica Medical Center
- UCLA Health JCCC: Jonsson Comprehensive Cancer Center
- OK for external use on second reference
- WVUCLA: UCLA West Valley Medical Center
Grammar, spelling and style
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Abbreviations
An abbreviation is the shortened form of a written word. In most cases, only abbreviate names on the second reference. Avoid using abbreviations that would not be easily recognized by most readers. Try to use abbreviations sparingly. Avoid using more than one abbreviation in a sentence. For information about how to abbreviate specific items, refer to their particular entry in this guide or the AP Stylebook.
Abortion
Use anti-abortion (not pro-life or anti-choice), abortion rights (not pro-abortion, anti-life or pro-choice) and abortion doctor or abortion practitioner (not abortionist).
Academic degrees/credentials
Only include highest-earned degree, with the exception of "MD, PhD," when both should be listed. When the second-highest credential is relevant to the communication message, a second credential may be used. Use at the end of a full name on the first reference only and in captions. Always use initials.
Do not use technical certifications or memberships after a name. Technical certifications include certifications around a technical skill set, such as ACLS, BLS, PALS and others.
Only credentials that have been earned should be included. Do not include credentials that the individual is working toward but has not yet earned.
Use commas when multiple credentials are listed.
When trying to establish someone’s position as an expert in a story, refer only to his or her specialty rather than using the initials of his or her degrees.
Do not use periods between letters of academic degrees: MD, not M.D.; PhD, not Ph.D. If the subject is an MD, PhD or DO, refer to him or her as "Dr." on second reference.
Examples: John Smith, MD, seen here, with his patients; Jennifer Conner, BSN, joined UCLA General Pediatrics in 2016.
Academic departments and divisions
Lowercase the names of academic departments and divisions, except when used as a proper noun or when part of the official and formal name.
Examples:
- Does UCLA have a marketing department?
- the UCLA Department of Neurology
- the dean of the division of social sciences
- the UCLA Division of Humanities
- the UCLA College of Letters and Science's Division of Life Sciences
Accept, except
Accept has several different meanings but in general means one of three things: to willingly receive something, to give permission or approval to or to regard as proper or an ultimate truth.
Except refers to an exclusion or something outside of the ordinary.
Acronyms
An acronym is a word formed from the first letter(s) of a series of words. Omit periods between the letters. Generally, capitalize acronyms when the series of words form a proper name, such as CDC for Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, or the individual letters are pronounced, such as HMO for health maintenance organization. On first reference, spell out the acronym with the acronym appearing in parentheses.
Examples: The word laser is an acronym for light amplification by stimulated emission of radiation.
UNESCO (pronounced you-Ness-co) is an acronym for the United Nations Educational, Scientific & Cultural Organization.
The University of California Office of the President (UCOP) issued a letter today to chancellors. UCOP requests all campuses to submit their institutional goals by noon tomorrow.
Act
Capitalize when using act as a piece of legislation.
Example: The Dream Act
Addresses
Use abbreviations for street, avenue, boulevard and parkway when writing numbered addresses. All other street designations (lane, circle, alley, and so on) should be spelled out.
Do not spell out numbers in addresses. Only use the numeric form for the house or building number. However, street names that use ordinal numbers 1-9 should be spelled out and capitalized.
Examples:
- 1234 Main St.
- 7654 Willow Circle
- 745 Fifth Ave.
Affect, effect
Affect is most commonly used as a verb, meaning to influence. There is seldom a need to use affect as a noun in daily language, unless describing an emotion. Use affect rather than impact, when illustrating the influence one thing has on another.
Example: Supporting local businesses affects the local economy.
Effect can be used as either a verb or a noun. As a verb, it means to cause. In its noun form, it means a result.
Example: The fall of the regime was the effect of widespread protests.
Ages
Numerals should always be used for living things. For inanimate objects or when used at the beginning of a sentence, spell out the number. When expressed as an adjective before a noun or as a substitute for a noun, use a combination of numerals and hyphens.
Examples: John Doe, 35, is a rising star in the organization. John Doe is 35 years old.
Thirty-five-year-old John Doe is on the fast-track to success in the organization.
The five-year-old building is already in need of repairs.
AIDS, HIV
AIDS is acceptable in all references to “acquired immune deficiency syndrome.” AIDS is caused by the human immunodeficiency virus, or HIV. HIV is acceptable in all references.
All-
Use a hyphen when using this as a prefix.
Examples: all-around; all-encompassing
Alumnus, alumni; alumna, alumnae
Alumnus is the singular, masculine form of alumni. Alumna is the singular, feminine form of alumnae. Use alumni when referring to a group of men and women.
Alzheimer's disease
Lowercase disease. Second reference can be shortened to Alzheimer's.
American Medical Association
Use AMA on second and subsequent references.
Ampersand (&)
Use only when it is part of the name of an organization or a composition. Also see Capitalization for additional guidelines on when to use it in titles and for navigation.
Examples: U.S. News & World Report; House & Garden Magazine
am/pm
Not a.m. or AM. See Time entry.
Annual
Describes an event that happens once every year. Events cannot be considered annual unless they have been held for at least two successive years. If reporting on an event that is the first of an event to be held annually, note that rather than labeling it as an annual event. Do not use the description “first annual.” Use inaugural.
Another
Do not use as a synonym for additional. Only use when it doubles the original amount mentioned.
Examples: Twenty people have signed up for classes; another 20 are expected to sign up soon.
Fifteen people agreed with the decision while another 15 dissented.
Wrong: Three stores were severely damaged in the flood. Another 10 suffered only minor damages.
Ante-
The rules in Prefixes apply.
Anti-
Generally no hyphen except in these cases: anti-abortion, anti-aggression, anti-apartheid, anti-collision, anti-corruption, anti-cruelty, anti-inflammatory, anti-labor, anti-racist, anti-racketeering, anti-secrecy, anti-terrorism, anti-war.
Anti-racism
Active process of identifying and opposing racism by changing systems, organizational structures, policies, practices and attitudes to provide equitable opportunities for all people on an individual and systemic level.
Anticipate, expect
When one anticipates something, there is an implied element of preparation for the coming event. Expect does not imply that preparations have been made for what is to come.
Anybody, any body, any one, anyone
Generally, use one word. When the emphasis is placed on a single element, use two words.
Examples: The right smoking cessation program can help anyone kick the habit.
Any one of the many programs available could help you quit smoking.
Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
No hyphens or slashes. Second reference can be ADHD.
Autism, autism spectrum disorder
Autism is appropriate for first and successive references. The term autism spectrum disorder is appropriate for first reference, if dictated by the research or faculty member, but on second reference use autism. Avoid using ASD in all references.
Award-winning
B
Baby boomer
Refers to the generation born after World War II and in their late teens and early 20s during the 1960s and 1970s. Always lowercase and only hyphenated when used as a compound modifier.
Examples: He is a baby boomer; He is of the baby-boomer generation.
Bachelor of Arts/Science
Bachelor’s degree can be used rather than the full title. See Academic degrees entry.
Bi-
The rules in Prefixes apply.
Biannual, biennial
Something that occurs biannually occurs twice each year. An event that occurs biennially occurs once every two years.
Bimonthly, biweekly
Bimonthly and biweekly refer to events that occur once every two months or once every two weeks, respectively. Semimonthly and semiweekly refer to events that occur twice each month or twice each week.
BIPOC
Collective term used to describe people who self-identify as Black, Indigenous and People of Color (BIPOC).
Black/African American
Black is a general term based in social constructs that describes diverse populations of African descent. African American is a term to identify people who are descendants of enslaved African people brought to the U.S during the transatlantic slave trade.
Breastfeed
One word
Broadcast
Use this for both present and past tense. Broadcasted is unacceptable.
By-
The rules in Prefixes apply.
“Bubble baby” disease
Use quotation marks around “bubble baby” but not disease.
C
California Department of Public Health
Use CADPH upon second and subsequent references.
Capitalization
See Capitalization entry.
Caregiver
Caregiver is preferable to caretaker when referring to the care of people.
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention
Second reference can use the abbreviation CDC. The abbreviation takes a singular verb.
Certified registered nurse practitioner
The abbreviation CRNP is acceptable in all references.
Cesarean section
Second reference can be C-section. In patient materials, Cesarean birth is preferred. Example: Whether you have a vaginal birth or a Cesarean birth, UCLA Health is here for your recovery.
City
Follow rules of capitalization. When using more generalized terms, always lowercase.
Click here
Avoid. Most web users intuitively know to “click” at a hyperlink. The link should be the part of the text that describes the function. Use term Learn more.
Clinical trial phases
Lowercase phase. Use the Arabic numeral, not Roman numeral.
Example: phase 2 clinical trial
Co-
Hyphenate when creating a word that indicates status. In other combinations, do not hyphenate.
Examples: co-pilot; co-author; coexist; cooperation
Note that cooperation and similar words are exceptions to the rule that prefixes should be hyphenated when the following word begins with the same vowel.
Coinsurance
Not co-insurance.
Complementary/Complimentary
Complementary refers to the ability of a person or item to enhance or add to another. Complimentary is in reference to something that is free of charge.
Composition titles
Except for books that are primary catalogs of reference material (such as dictionaries, directories, encyclopedias), put quotation marks around titles of books, magazine articles, lectures, seminars, films and TV shows, computer games, poems and songs.
Examples: "Prescription for Excellence"; "The Mary Tyler Moore Show"; The Washington Post; New England Journal of Medicine
Comprise vs. compose
Comprise is a verb that means “to include or contain” or “to consist of.” Therefore, comprised of is incorrect. Use comprise to introduce the complete list of items that make up a whole.
Example: UCLA Health comprises Ronald Reagan UCLA Medical Center; UCLA Santa Monica Medical Center; UCLA Mattel Children’s Hospital; Resnick Neuropsychiatric Hospital at UCLA; David Geffen School of Medicine at UCLA; UCLA Faculty Practice Group and more than 200 community health clinics.
Compose means “to make up or form the basis of.”
Examples: A team composed of UCLA oncologists and geneticists discovered a new gene associated with breast cancer.
The cloth is composed of cotton and polyester.
Comma
See Punctuation entry.
Coordination of benefits
Spell out initial reference. May be shortened to COB upon subsequent references in the same article.
Comparison of benefits
Always spell out.
Copay
No hyphen. Not copayment, co-pay or co-payment.
COVID-19
Use COVID-19 on all mentions, not Coronavirus. Shortening to COVID is also OK. All variants of the original SARS-CoV-2 virus are lowercase. Example: delta, omicron. Long COVID is not written as “long COVID” when not at the beginning of a sentence or in a title case title. SARS-CoV-2 is the name of the virus that causes COVID-19. Note capitalization and hyphenation.
Because the disease’s name is hyphenated, hyphenated phrases like COVID-19-related should use an en-dash between the disease name and the linked term. When in doubt, simply rewrite to avoid. Example: decisions related to the COVID-19 outbreak.
CT scan
The abbreviation is acceptable for all references. The abbreviation stands for computerized tomography. Never write CAT scan, which is the popular pronunciation.
D
Dates
Only abbreviate the following months: Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov., Dec. Always capitalize all months. Always use the cardinal number, not ordinal (1st, 2nd, 3rd, and so on).
Example: Oct. 3, 2011
Days of the week
Always capitalize. Never abbreviate unless they are used in a tabular calendar.
Densely populated
Use this instead of inner urban.
Diabetes
Lowercase diabetes. Uppercase Type 1 and Type 2. Lowercase prediabetes and gestational diabetes.
Example: The patient was diagnosed with Type 1 diabetes after managing prediabetes for several years.
Dialogue
Always use dialogue spelling even when you are writing about a dialog box.
Disability
A physical, mental, cognitive or developmental condition that impairs, interferes with or limits a person's ability to engage in certain tasks or actions or participate in typical daily activities and interactions. Use disability instead of outdated terms such as handicapped, differently-abled, victim, special-needs or unfortunate. Refer to “a person with a disability” as opposed to a “disabled person.”
Disabled, handicapped, impaired
Never mention a person’s disability unless it is crucial to the story. Of the three terms mentioned, the preferred term is disabled. If used, refer to the person as a person with a disability, not as a disabled person.
Diseases
Never capitalize unless they are known by the name of the person who identified the disease or they come at the beginning of a sentence.
Examples: arthritis, not Arthritis; Alzheimer’s disease
Doctor
Abbreviate to Dr. when describing those with doctorate degrees. Academic credentials follow their names on the first reference only. The abbreviation should be used only on second and subsequent references. Never write Dr. John Smith, MD. See MD entry.
Doctor of Osteopathic Medicine
The abbreviation DO is acceptable in all references. See Academic Degrees and Doctor entries.
Doctor of Dental Surgery
The abbreviation DDS is acceptable in all references. See Academic Degrees and Doctor entries.
Doctor of Podiatric Medicine
The abbreviation DPM is acceptable in all references. See Academic Degrees and Doctor entries.
Download
One word.
Drug addiction
Do not refer to someone as a “drug addict.” Use “someone with a drug addiction” or “someone experiencing a drug problem.”
Drug references
In general, trade or brand names of drugs or products must be avoided. Use the generic name whenever possible. Refer to the Physicians' Desk Reference to determine a drug's generic name. Only refer to the trademark name if it is essential to the story. When a trademark name is used, capitalize it.
E
Each other, one another
Two people look at each other, more than two look at one another. When the number is undefined, either phrase can be used.
ED
Emergency department. Do not use emergency room, or ER.
Either … or; neither … nor
The nouns that follow these words do not constitute a compound subject; they are alternate subjects and require a verb that agrees with the closer subject.
Examples: Neither they nor he is going; neither he nor they are going.
Elective v. essential procedures
Elective procedures and surgeries can be scheduled in advance and are not for a life-threatening condition. Urgent or emergency surgeries and procedures, also known as essential, are for an acute or life-threatening condition, such as appendicitis.
Never hyphenate.
Everyone/every one
Two words when it means each individual item. One word when used as a pronoun meaning all persons.
Extra-
The rules in Prefixes apply.
F
When posting to Facebook, follow all grammatical and spelling standards as explained in this guide and the AP Stylebook.
Face covering/face mask
A face covering is what people should wear outside of a medical setting; a face mask is what providers will wear in the clinic.
First quarter/First-quarter
Hyphenate when used as a compound modifier.
Examples: The company released a financial statement for the first quarter; The company released a first-quarter financial statement.
Food and Drug Administration
Second reference can be FDA. Note: It is not the Federal Drug Administration.
Form titles
Use the proper name at the top of the form to name the PDF document for online posting. Avoid spaces in file names and use dashes or hyphens if needed to separate words.
Examples: ReleaseofInformation.pdf; RegistrationandPrescriptionOrderForm.pdf=
Also, ensure the revision date appears at the bottom left of the document for easy identification. Use the Adobe Acrobat icon or label with [PDF], so users know they will download a document.
Full-
Hyphenate when used to form compound modifiers
Examples: full-dress; full-page; full-fledged; full-scale; full-length
Fully funded
Commercial health plans. Use only when necessary. Do not hyphenate -ly adverbs. Avoid fully-funded and fully-insured.
Full time/full-time
Hyphenate when used as a compound modifier.
Fundraise, fundraiser, fundraising
G
Governor
Capitalize and abbreviate as Gov. (singular) or Govs. (plural) when used as a formal title before one or more names.
Grade, -grader
Hyphenate in combining forms: a fourth-grade pupil, a 12th-grade student, a first-grader, a 10th-grader.
Groundbreaking
One word.
H
Hand-washing
Healthcare
One word.
Headlines
See Capitalization entry.
Health Equity and Inclusive Excellence (HEIE)
Do not use Health Equity, Diversity & Inclusion (HEDI).
High-tech
HIPAA
Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act of 1996. Not HIPPA.
Hispanic, Latinx or Latino
Use Latino unless the word is part of a proper name of a project, program or organization. The term Latino is widely accepted within academia and beyond and the term Latino aligns with our centers within the health sciences, UCLA campus and government agencies. Some people may prefer one term over another when referring to themselves, so it is best to ask.
HMO
Widely used acronym for health maintenance organization, a health plan product.
Holidays and holy days
Always capitalize the name of the holiday or holy day.
Hospitals
Write out the full name of each UCLA Health hospital, except in internal documents that consumers will never read. See Naming Conventions for UCLA Health entry.
Hospital units, divisions, floors
Capitalize when presented as part of the full and official name. In UCLA materials, this typically means “UCLA” is included in the name. Otherwise, units, floors, divisions and departments should be lowercase.
Examples: Please direct Helena Hall to the pediatric intensive care unit.
The UCLA Health Neonatal Intensive Care Unit was recognized by The Joint Commission for best practices in maternal and neonatal care.
The medical intensive care unit (MICU) is located on the fifth floor.
Exception: However, when presented as part of a cover title for a floor/unit brochure, the floor/unit name should always be capitalized, even without the UCLA Health qualifier as it is presented within the clear context that we are talking about UCLA Health. The rest of the title still follows sentence case capitalization.
Example: Your guide to the Pediatric Intensive Care Unit
Hours of operation
Spell out days of the week, followed by a colon. Use an en dash to denote a time span. Follow rules in the Time entry.
Example: Monday – Thursday: 10 am – 4:30 pm
Hyper-
The rules in Prefixes apply.
I
Immediate Care
Due to contractual obligations, we do not have urgent care clinics. We call them Immediate Care clinics, but we provide urgent care services in our immediate care clinics.
Impact
While grammatically correct to use its verb form when referring to something that has had an effect on one’s life, avoid using it in this manner. It can cause confusion in the medical setting as it has a medical definition (when something is impacted, it is either blocked or there is something lodged in a bodily passage; it can also mean that two pieces of bone have been driven together or that a tooth is wedged between the jawbone and another tooth).
Instead, use affect.
Do not use impactful, which is considered jargon.
In/into
In indicates location. Into indicates movement.
Examples: She was in the ED; Her family walked into her room from the hall.
In-network
Hyphenate when used as an adjective.
Innovative
Avoid this term in all health plan content unless it can be sourced to a specific, non-UCLA Health document identifying the program, facility or project noted as innovative.
Inoculate
Inquire/inquiry
Never enquire or enquiry.
Insurance, insurance plan
Use health plan or health plan product, avoid insurance product except where required by law.
Intensive care unit
Second reference can be ICU.
Inter-
The rules in Prefixes apply.
Internet/intranet
Lowercase internet and intranet.
Intrauterine device
Abbreviate only on second reference to IUD.
J
The Joint Commission
Second reference can be Joint Commission.
Junior/senior
Only abbreviate at the end of a full name. Do not put a comma before Jr. or Sr.
Example: Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.
L
Languages
Capitalize the proper names of languages and dialects.
-less
Never use a hyphen before this suffix.
LGBTQ+
Use as an acronym for “lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer/questioning” with a "+" sign to recognize and include the diverse sexual and gender identities experienced within our community, including intersex and asexual people.
Liaison
Likable
Never likeable.
-like
Do not precede this suffix by a hyphen unless the letter L would be tripled.
Examples: Businesslike; shell-like
Like
Follow with a hyphen when used as a prefix meaning similar to.
Examples: Like-minded; like-natured
Like v. as
Use like as a preposition to compare noun and pronouns. It requires an object.
Example: Jim blocks like a pro.
The conjunction as is the correct word to introduce clauses.
Example: Jim blocks the linebacker as he should.
Like v. such as
Like is used to compare an object to something similar.
Example: The meeting included a group of doctors like Barbara (indicating Barbara was not in the group, but the doctors were similar to her).
Such as should be used when explaining an object that is included in a group.
Example: The meeting included a group of doctors such as Barbara, Marisol and Jesus (indicating Barbara was among the doctors in the group).
Login, logon, logoff
Write as two words when using as verbs. As they are written in this entry, they are nouns.
Examples: The login is 12345; Please log in to your computer.
Long term, long-term
Hyphenate when using as a compound modifier.
Examples: We will win in the long term; He has a long-term assignment
Los Angeles
Referring to LA is OK, no periods.
Downtown LA can be capitalized in reference to a proper name that includes Downtown LA. In general reference, lowercase downtown LA. DTLA can be used on second reference.
San Fernando Valley can be referred to as the Valley.
When referencing a coast or region, they can be capitalized when appropriate for marketing reasons or to refer to a specific region. When referring to coasts or regions generally, lowercase.
Examples: Bringing World-Class Cancer Care in Northern San Luis Obispo County (ad headline)
We drove to the west coast.
We are adding new clinics in the South Bay.
Los Angeles County Department of Public Health
In a story with multiple references to the department, second reference can be LACDPH.
M
MD
The acceptable abbreviation on all references for medical doctor. Although the abbreviation is acceptable in all references, only use this abbreviation on the first mention of a medical doctor after their full name. For subsequent references, use the abbreviation Dr. before their last name. Do not use periods with degrees, as in M.D., Ph.D.
Example: First mention: John Smith, MD; second mention: Dr. John Smith
Exceptions: In some contexts, you can use Dr. on all mentions including the first, for example, social media posts where casual tone is prioritized, first-pitch scripts.
Medicaid
Always capitalized, as it is a proper noun.
Medicare
Always capitalized, as it is a proper noun.
Mental health care
Not mental healthcare.
Mid-
The rules in Prefixes apply, except when followed by a figure, such as mid-40s.
Military titles
Capitalize a military rank when used as a formal title before an individual’s name. On the first reference, use the appropriate title before the full name of a member of the military. Subsequent references should use only the service-member’s last name.
Months
See Dates entry.
Multi-
Prefix rules apply, but in general, no hyphen. Examples: multicolored, multimillion, multilateral, multimillionaire
myUCLAhealth (MyChart)
Name of the portal patients use to look up their medical records, make appointments and contact their doctor. The mobile app for the portal is called MyChart. Use myUCLAhealth (MyChart) on first use. Second reference can be shortened to either half, whichever is more relevant for the material.
N
N95 masks
National Institutes of Health
Note that Institutes is plural. Second reference can be NIH. The agency is a part of the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services.
Nationalities and races
Capitalize the proper names of nationalities and races. Uppercase Black, lowercase white. Never use yellow, red or mulatto to describe a person’s ethnicity.
No.
Use No. as the abbreviation for number in conjunction with a figure to indicate position or rank.
Example: UCLA Health hospitals rank No. 1 in Los Angeles.
Non-English-speaking
Hyphenated as an adjective.
Nonstudent
One word.
Numerals
Spell out numbers one through nine or at the beginning of a sentence. Use ordinal numbers (1st, 2nd, 3rd and so on) when the sequence has been assigned in forming names (the 4th Ward). When writing out a headline or a chapter name, always use the numeral, even for numbers one through nine. When referring to money, use numerals. For cents or amounts of $1 million or more, spell the words cents, million, billion, trillion and so on.
Examples: $26.52, $100,200, $8 million, 6 cents.
Exceptions:
- In content where easy readability or length are critical, you can use numerals for all numbers including one through nine as needed.
- Instructional contexts for easier reading
Example: Take ibuprofen every 6 hours. - Video and closed captions for easier reading
Example: The first trimester of pregnancy goes from weeks 1 through 12. - Social media posts for casual tone and brevity
Example: UCLA Health pioneers 4 new treatments.
O
OB/GYN
The acceptable abbreviation for obstetrician/gynecologist. The abbreviation is acceptable in all references including the name of the department and specialty.
Exception: For SEO purposes, website pages may use OBGYN in titles.
One
Hyphenate when used in writing fractions.
Examples: one-half; one-third
Ordinal indicators
st, nd, rd, and so on. Do not superscript.
Example: Mr. Pence was the 10th Republican governor to approve Medicaid expansion under the Affordable Care Act.
Online
Not on-line or on line. Use only when necessary as it is usually implied.
Orthopedics/Orthopaedics
Use orthopedics for consumer-facing material: brand advertising; acquisition campaigns; patient-facing emails; consumer/patient-facing blog; and consumer web pages.
Use orthopaedics for peer-to-peer material: awareness and referral campaigns; reputation marketing; targeting peer-to-peer emails; and department/division web pages.
Outpatient
Not out-patient.
Out-of-network
Out-of-network (adjective), not non-network.
Out-of-pocket
As an adjective.
Overall
A single word when used as an adjective or adverb.
P
Page numbers
Never abbreviate page as pg. Follow with figures. Page should be uppercase.
Example: Page 13
PCP
Primary care physician. Spell out on initial reference.
Portable Document File. Use the abbreviation PDF in all references.
Percent
Use the % symbol after a number, with no space. Do not use the word percent.
Example: The number of cases declined 10% compared to the year prior.
Period
Only use one space after a period at the end of a sentence.
Personifications
Always capitalize.
Examples: Mother Nature; Old Man Winter
Phone numbers and extensions
Always use hyphens to separate the area code, the prefix and the last four digits. Do not use parentheses.
Example: 310-825-2585 x1057.
Photo captions
Do not italicize photo captions.
Include highest-earned academic degree at the end of a full name on first reference only. See Academic degrees entry.
Captioning a single photo:
- If photo includes only two subjects, add “left” after name of subject on left; subject on the right does not require location tag
- If there are more than two photo subjects, start caption with “From left:”
- Examples:
- Pamela Jacobs, RN, left, reviews her department’s annual agility test results with Peggy Casey, BSN.
- From left: Pamela Jacobs, RN; Peggy Casey, BSN; Sheila Shirazi, physical therapist; and J-Way Poserio, respiratory therapist.
Captioning photos that appear in a grid
- Bold directional (such as Top right, Bottom right) and add colon.
- If the photo includes only two subjects, add “left” name of subject on left; subject on the right does not require location tag. Do not bold “left.”
If photo includes more than two subjects, include “From left:” at start of caption. Do not bold “From left:”
Examples:
- Top right: Jennifer Chang, MD, left, offers support to a patient.
- Bottom left: From left: Ardis Moe, MD, reviews a chart with Margrit Carlson, MD, and Jessica Mits, RN.
Physician assistant
Second reference can be the abbreviation PA.
pm
Not p.m. or PM. See Time entry.
Portal
Point of entry for a website or section of a website.
POS
Acronym often used to identify a point of service health plan product.
Postmortem
Do not hyphenate.
Postoperative
Do not hyphenate. However, post-op when used in the shortened form.
Post-traumatic stress disorder
Hyphenate post-traumatic. Second reference can be PTSD.
Pre-authorization
Hyphenate. Do not use pre-certification.
Pre-existing conditions
Not preexisting or preex. Always hyphenate, never shorten.
Prefixes
In general, do not hyphenate when using a prefix with a word starting with a consonant. The three following rules are consistent, but do have some exceptions:
- Except for cooperate and coordinate, use a hyphen if the prefix ends in a vowel and the word that follows begins with the same vowel.
- Use a hyphen if the word that follows is capitalized.
- Use a hyphen to join doubled prefixes (sub-subcommittee).
For exceptions to any of the above rules, check the specific entry in this guide.
Preoperative
Do not hyphenate. However, pre-op when used in the shortened form.
Preventive
Not preventative.
Primary care doctor, primary care specialty
Do not hyphenate primary care.
Pro-
Use a hyphen when coining words that denote support for something.
Examples: Pro-labor, pro-peace, pro-business
Pronouns
Use the person’s preferred pronouns. In stories about people who identify as neither male nor female or ask not to be referred to as he/she/him/her, use the person’s name in place of a pronoun or use they/them/their. Be sure that the phrasing does not imply more than one person.
Provider
Do not use in place of physician or doctor. Use provider when the reference is more generic or could be someone besides a physician/doctor, like a physical therapist.
R
Referral
Occurs when a participating primary care physician refers a covered member (patient) to a participating specialist. Not the same as pre-authorization.
S
Both says and said can be used to attribute direct quotes and paraphrased comments, but it’s important to be consistent throughout a document or article. Pick one and stick with it throughout. Says is less formal, so as a general rule, use says when wanting to set a more casual tone. For attributions directly related to something that happened in the past, use said. Example: During his meeting with family, Dr. Robinson said the patient’s prognosis looked good.
Seasons
Lowercase unless part of a formal name or at the start of a sentence.
Stages of cancer
Lowercase stage; use numerals 1-4.
Example: stage 4 cancer
States
Spell out the names of states when listed alone in textual material. State names may be abbreviated if they appear in datelines, photo captions and lists, or to fit typographical requirements for tabular material. Be consistent with whichever format is chosen throughout the publication.
The following states are never to be abbreviated: Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas and Utah.
Students of color
Use this phrase instead of minority students.
Systemwide
One word, no hyphen
T
T cell (n.), T-cell (adj.)
Capitalize T. No hyphen for the noun form. Hyphenate when used as an adjective.
Examples: He had a healthy number of T cells; His T-cell counts increased over time.
Telehealth/telemedicine
Do not use. See Virtual care entry.
That/which (pronouns)
Use that and which in referring to inanimate objects and to animals without a name. Use that for essential clauses, important to the meaning of a sentence, and without commas: I remember the day that we met. Use which for nonessential clauses, where the pronoun phrase is less necessary, and use commas: The team, which finished last a year ago, is in first place.
Time
Use figures except for noon and midnight. Use a colon to separate hours from minutes. Avoid redundancies, such as 11 am this morning. Never use the o’clock construct. When describing a span of time that lasts for an hour or more, follow these guidelines:
- If the span of time falls completely within the morning or completely in the afternoon, only place the time designations on the last time noted.
Examples: 9 to 11 am; 4:30 to 6 pm - If the time period spans noon or midnight, place time designations on both times.
Examples: 10 am to 2 pm; 11:30 pm to 1 am - 24/7 — indicates 24 hours a day, seven days a week.
- PT — If needed, refer to the Pacific time zone as PT, not PDT or PST. Wherever possible, such as in reference to local events where the audience is also local, omit the time zone.
See Hours of Operation entry.
Titles
In general, confine capitalization to formal titles used directly before an individual’s name. Otherwise, lowercase titles, regardless of the importance of the position.
Examples: The committee told President Obama that they disagreed with him; The financial director of the hospital, Bob Smith, released the quarterly financial report.
Titles of compositions and broadcasts should always be capitalized. For more guidance, see the following entries: Capitalization; Composition titles.
Trauma center levels
Use Roman numerals.
Example: Level III trauma center.
Tumor grades
Use numerals 1-4.
U
Underrepresented minority (URM)
An underrepresented racial or ethnic minority.
Underrepresented in medicine (URiM)
Use this instead of underrepresented minorities when referring to people of color in medicine. Underrepresented minorities is an older term that inappropriately describes people of color without acknowledging that certain racial groups are not represented in medicine due to decades of systemic racism that has led to more educational and social barriers for certain racial groups to be equally represented in medicine and other STEM fields. Therefore, the most appropriate term is "underrepresented in medicine" or URiM.
Urgent care
Do not use. See Immediate care entry.
URL
The address of a web page. See Linking policies entry.
U.S. News & World Report
U.S.
Username
One word.
V
Veterans Affairs
Not Veterans Administration. Second reference can be VA.
Virtual care
Use to refer to virtual medicine. Do not use telehealth or telemedicine.
W
Washington, D.C.
On second reference, use Washington or District of Columbia.
web page
Two words with lowercase w.
Website
One word with lowercase w.
Weeklong
Well-being
Who/whom
Who is the pronoun used for references to human beings and animals with a name. It is grammatically the subject (never the object) of a sentence, clause or phrase.
Examples: The woman who rented the room left the window open; Who is there?
Whom is used when someone is the object of a verb or preposition.
Examples: The woman to whom the room was rented left the window open; Whom do you wish to see?
Word-of-mouth
World Health Organization
Use the abbreviation WHO on second and subsequent references.
X-Y-Z
X
When posting to X, feel free to abbreviate and truncate words as necessary. Take care to maintain the original meaning of the tweet and to avoid confusing or uncommon abbreviations.
X-ray
Capitalize X. Not xray or x-ray.
Year-end
Yearlong
Years
Use figures without commas: 2011. Use commas only with a month and day: Nov. 30, 2011. Use an s without an apostrophe when referencing spans of decades or centuries: 1900s, 1870s.